Friday, February 16, 2007

( I ) When She Left

I looked up wondering why is she gone
I looked up seeing her face telling me the story
I looked up wondering how it could have been
I Cried out for her name to be found
I Cried out for our love to be born
I Cried for our lives to be true
I Cried out for her voice to be called
I Cried out for her heart to be mine
I demanded for her love
I demanded for my star
I daydreamed that from now on we are never to be
I sat down wondering how comes
I sat down looking at her ways
I sat down seeing the end
I sat down listing to her goodbyes
I sat down wondering why am i in this pain
I sat down thinking how could i love her
I sat down dreaming on how i could love anyone like her
I sat down
I sat down
and I sat down

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

dis is slimting i loved dis 1 i loved da use ur words vrey nice

Anonymous said...

HARD TO BELIEVE THAT A MAN WROTE THIS. ITS NICE TO KNOW THAT SOMEONE FROM THE MALE SPECIES STILL HAS A HEART. UR BEAUTIFUL WORDS REMIND ME OF THE SITUATION THAT I'M GOING THRU

Anonymous said...

THIS IS VERY VERY GOOD. KEEP DOING WHAT YOU DOING AND GOOD LUCK AND KEEP WRITTING.

Anonymous said...

hey b dis poem got 2 me and made me think bout us. itz tru wat u say how itz easier to express words when itz written down, but keep writting coz u got a gift boo bless xxxx